Reviews for Summer Days
Artemis Anderson chapter 1 . 12/7/2007
Beautiful
Amy chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
I love all your songs you're really talented but this one is my favorite. Write songs again!
differentiated chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
that was a great story... it kinda reminds me of something i went through.
Ethereal October chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
I liked the idea of this poem, and for the most part you expressed yourself well. One thing that I would suggest changing is the repetition of bleed/bleeding in the sixth stanza. You use a variation of the word bleed three times in about two lines, and it's a bit overkill. I also think you should cut it down a little, because you're repeating yourself often. Like stuff about her crying, and her pain. Also, add some more detail from the blissful summer days aspect of it (that was what really appealed to me, btw.) Check your grammar, as well: I could be wrong, but I don't know if "blissed" summer days is correct.
lexy chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
hey gurl, i love the poem you wrote for me, everytime i read it. it still moves me.i miss those "summer days" wit him. but i screwed up, i should have told him how i felt bout him. if only i could go back in time. im just gonna have to live wit it. g2g. ttyl. lylasf, lexy