|Reviews for what my heart would see in the looking glass|
| these and those enormous chapter 1 . 1/24/2005
I think you've hugged your guitar today.
| dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
The river's song, huh? Well, it's captured here, in the way the words rise and roll and fall. It's a very graceful poem, and it stands on its own, like all of your work. I'd say "Nice Job", but I'd like to say that to everything you write, so I'll settle for "Upload More Or I'll Stalk You".
(...Also, glad to hear Eden is coming back. I still have my stolen copy from freshman year sitting on my computer desk. Because I am that in love with it. You and Skycryer can keep the damn guitar.)
| Aryaveiel Skycryer chapter 1 . 1/8/2005
This is really an amazing piece, one of your best I think. But there may be a problem with your love for the guitar...'tis a love triangle, and I'm included! It loves ME, not you! Never! But besides that, I love how you portray the emotion in this poem. It gets better as it goes. It's interesting how you can see some of your influences come through in this.