wow...that's a great one

This is so nice! Submit it to Serendipity and it'll go so well with all my faery pictures! Did you know that Mr. Mac actually called me the pixie girl because I drew so many pictures of faeries? This is so totally my favorite poem of yours so far. Nice!

Oh. Nice. I truly enjoyed reading this one. Very creative and original. I liked how you subtly repeated some lines. Also, I liked how the poem is layed out. It allowed the poem to be a faster read and spaced out what normally would have been a shorter poem. A very good shorter poem I should add. Very nice!

...I am awed. Yet another poem to add to my Favorites Inventory! Intricately woven... expecting more from you in the future!

.::.:.::AnathA::.:.::.

...Breath taking...::dies:: X.X

~ Noelle ~

You really use repitition to your advantage! D