Reviews for Listen
CucumberPickles chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
How come I feel like I read this before? And yet... Of course, someone is ALWAYS lying to you.
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
Awesome poem. I love how you juxtaposed the two different voices. Very well written and powerful. It has an excellent flowing feel to it and I loved the pattern of the words as I read them. My favorite piece of yours that I have read so far.
A.L. Eglise chapter 1 . 1/8/2005
Pretty, pretty...Yet another lullaby to a mind enveloped within a depth of dementia...

lozfairy chapter 1 . 1/8/2005
This is a wonderful poem, the last few lines 'I'm so undecided and so Far Away From the truth of my life Is slipping Away I think someone lied to Me Again Today...' are lovely. They seems so sad...I really like this. Lozfairy x
Jesse the Storyteller chapter 1 . 1/8/2005
Awesome awesome awesome! Everything flows well and the message is awesome. Great great great! D
queenvixta chapter 1 . 1/8/2005
I like this a lot, deep and mysterious, very cool. I'd like to read more like this.