Reviews for Unseen atop her blood red berry
Kyre Crow chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
I liked the rhythm of this. it's simple and says so much.

(although I don't really know what else to say 'cause my brain died after my sibling's party...)
Fat Passion Fish Poet chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
*Giggles lots*

Absolutely love it!

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Glass Dragon chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
I must say that that's quite awful.
B.S. Ha chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
now there's an idea that i can agree with
in theory chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
Pretty, I like the bouncy rhythm this has. Your rhythm seems effortless, it's fun to read. Nice work.
Trinket90 chapter 1 . 2/22/2005 sad! But then, I always was a fan of tall faeries and elves rather than microscopic so- death to the miniscule faeries!
Mlle. Daae chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
Hi, this is about the third fiction press story I've ever read, but I have read fanfiction for over a year. I thought it was very, very good. There's just something about it, but I can't really tell what... Anyway, I really enjoyed, you are a very good author, and I hope to read more of your work in the future!~Mlle. Daae
Skiv chapter 1 . 1/10/2005


RoseMcCann chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
I really liked that!

I'm feeling too unoriginal right now to offer any further comments, I'm afraid... really great though!
IsisAvenger chapter 1 . 1/8/2005
I really like this, it made me laugh. It has an air of whimsy to it.
Rocky G chapter 1 . 1/8/2005
Excellent work very funny, Especially enjoyed the last lines.
An-Author-At-Heart chapter 1 . 1/8/2005
Wow, what an interesting combination - humor and fantasy! It's interesting, though that hero was pretty cruel to eat that fairy... Anyway, I enjoyed reading it. It was short yet delightful. THe poem had a good flow and it rhymes well, especially how it all has the same kinda rhyme.