|Reviews for The Pentagram 1: Fire Witch|
| Guest chapter 25 . 11/10/2012
The End? Or the end of the beginning?
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/10/2012
jess is lonely; think daddy will help?
| Dead Deactivated chapter 25 . 7/25/2009
I like the book... But Jeshycka's fire faery name is Bradhadair which sounds like Brad had air... was it suppose to be like that? Fantastic book!
| PQ chapter 25 . 3/25/2008
I liked this it was nice I cant wait for the rest...
*Runs off* On to the sequel!
| Midnite Blu chapter 22 . 2/2/2007
it's really good. it seems to me like you mixed, Charmed, with the Sweep series as well as your own independant ideas. I like it alot!
| Genvieve chapter 11 . 3/29/2006
I loved this story... I read Pentagram 2 before the Pentagram 1, and it's very interesting. Did I mention I loved this story? Can't wait for the next Petagram stories, and the finishing of the second.
| Mona chapter 25 . 2/2/2006
I LOVE IT! It's so cool. Such a good idea. I think I'm gonna go read the water one, now. I love the names, too. Especially the spelling of 'Jeshycka.'
| D L Dzioba chapter 20 . 10/3/2005
The writing is progressing rather well from here. But You still need alot more details. You have some more mistakes and typos. But It is greatly improving from the first chapter.
| D L Dzioba chapter 10 . 10/3/2005
Interesting. The writing is still ify... But I'm getting into the story now. Try and have longer chapters.
| D L Dzioba chapter 4 . 10/3/2005
I must say that this needs alot of work. The senseless use of 'y's in your names is gatting to be a little annoying and you lack alot of detail. It is as if you are just stringing together sentances, not making a story. Try a litter more detail and flow, and work on sendace variety. Most of your sentaces strat with either 'she' or 'Jeshycka', That gets a little old after one paragraph.
I'll keep reading but this nees some seious work. It is getting a little better each chapter though.
| D L Dzioba chapter 3 . 8/7/2005
The premis seems good enough but the exicution is if-y. I like the idea of this story/series. But I can't get past the why you are writing it. Try adding more details and mixing things up a bit. The Black Black Black Black Black is a bit... Boring. You have plenty of places that more details cona fit. Just try the old Writing advice.
Show, Don't tell.
| eraced chapter 25 . 8/7/2005
| One Desire chapter 25 . 8/6/2005
Aww, it's over. But I saw on your profile that you're working on the Water Witch. So that's good...
| Moonlight Tigress chapter 25 . 8/6/2005
i love it! And i cant wait for the next installment!
you've gotten my brain working again girl... so.. YEAH! COOLIES!
have fun on your trip! i might be able to get more chapters up for you! BYE!
| Moonlight Tigress chapter 24 . 8/5/2005
sweet! i love this character!and i like that idea too! the image, i mean...i can almost see it.. :D
where ya leavin?
oh well, if you cant help me thats ok too!
WRITE ON FELLOW WRITER! FOR I HAVE HAD SUGAR AND AM NUTS RIGHT NOW! YEAH!