Reviews for Dark Knight
larathiel chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
two words: beautifully perfect. i'm a sucker for poems that have a good rhythm and rhymn. plus the theme is very nicely done too. reminds me some how of something that wives and mothers would say to their young husbands and sons going out to fight a battle they will surely loose. a bit like hector's wife watching hector leave to fight achilles.
ossining chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
Beautiful and haunting. The whole poem has a fantasy/mythological feeling, and with the title of "Dark Knight," I'm assuming that's what you were going for. The rhyming is impeccable. Simple, short, but says a lot in those few words. Keep writing! :)
William G. Thorne chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
O wow, that is beautiful. it portrays Knight and Night perfectly. Not many people have a talent much like yours, the medieval period os probably the most written about, but it is what you write about it taht counts. Excellent!Blessed Be. ~William G. Thorne~