Reviews for Close My Eyes And See It All
shea's surrender chapter 1 . 2/8/2005
i like, i like. It seemed kinda threadbare, in an artsy kinda way. last line, as usual... (you're probably tired of me sayign that, but it's TRUE, you end EVERYTHING [with one or two exceptions] with this characteristic bang, it's like your signature). My only not so happy comment is that the middle/end gets kinda... iffy, i guess. kinda confusing, kinda just out there. Can't really see it like i normally can, but that can be fun too!Shea