myno chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
hm, if you got rid of the caps and bold, which are distracting, this could be made into quite a good poem. The emotion is very powerful in this piece, you obviously mean every word of it.
Kusje chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
sort of hard to read bcuz its in bold was , it was GREAT. keep it up.
Shadowed Mind chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
i love the way you seem to be yelling at the top of your voice, trying to get the emotion off your chest when i read this. it seems like you are desperate to tell this person how you feel, coz theyve backstabbed you, and that raw emotion has made this a fantastic essay thingy. keep writing. all my love, shadowed mind
Keith Andrew chapter 1 . 1/11/2005
Hey alex, please dont worry about it alright. God you sound so sad, cheer up okay. Remember i love you :-D something that will NOT change. Don't worry okay-Keith Andrew
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 1/11/2005
I like the way you kept it in caps and bold, it helps with the transfere of the emotion of the poem.

Keep up the ranting!
Kressida chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
ranting, i see... don't worry, it's good to get it out (without turning to cutting, i mean. and i also know how you feel, coz it hurts to bo betrayed, i've been betrayed by so many friends.. it bloody hurts, a lot! but i'll talk about THAT some other time.. :P love ya! lots of love, zai
xHannahx chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
happy then... you ok? thats a bit of a rant, but by the sounds of it, u're justified. i've been there, it hurts. hopedfully you'll be ok. love,