|Reviews for The ballad of the empty gun|
| Kristina Suko chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
I like this very much.
I saw a hand with a black gun, against a black background. The gun was smoking, and the one holding it wished he had another bullet.
Yet he hadn't killed anyone...
I adore the last verse.
| Chelsea chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
simply wow. i've never read anything like this and i think this is absolutely amazing. wow.
| HeartbreakersHorizon chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
This is a very promising piece to the worlds of the famous writers and poets out there now. the reason as to why i had rated it M was not on purpose. I just couldn't find a really good rating that would fit this. Thank u for reviewing to one of mine.
| Writerofascientist chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
Ohh...I like this a lot!
| Relayer chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
A very modern ballad, thought provoking. Nice.
I saw someone holding a (real) gun, using it's presence as a threat. But of course it's actually empty, and the person carrying it knows this. Insecurity maybe.
| amdespot chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
I saw a boy in an empty dark room.
It defines me, maybe you.
It was real.
It was black.
You were alone.
No blood. No organs.
No. I was thinking you wanted to kill yourself, but couldn't do it. Waiting for something. Symbolical.
| jennaaaa chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
This is a touching poem. I like it. The title is also interesting~
And thank you for your comment on pessimiste. I'm trying to find someone who'd translate my stories, so everyone could read them, but I'm still searching.. -_-;
| Joey7691 chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
A very good point. A very nice poem. Neat and insightful. Portraying exactly what the human mind would think. Nicely written.
P.S. No, Nigel didn't steel my girlfriend. I sound pissed because I am pissed. He stole my sister. A much bigger crime. I'm a girl by the way.
| noclipgod25 chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
I did not see an image of a gun, I saw an empty hand partly closed and blue-white as the ghostly pallor of a spirit. Only the hand, no people, solely focused on the dead blue-white hand palm up to a grey sky shining down with murky white light...humanity died of its own existence.
| SaveMeToo chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
This is one for the inqusitive mind. I'm still debating...
| The Imposer chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
If only the future bound us like your words,
you know what I saw
| Peaches n Eve chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
I like it. It's very nicely done, and the rhyme adds a lot, actually. I tend to despise ryhmes.
I'm not sure I'll say what I saw. Little... off. But I like it.