Reviews for Invisible Dream
Cindy Moon chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
There, there now dear.I see your optimism has run low for the time being (As have mine. [ Let's be lonely together.)Anyways, great poetry as usual, even if it is a bit on the cliche side, but what poem isn't? So bittersweet don't you think?-Cindy Moon *)
nata chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
A very touching poem. I've read only one or two of your works, but this one I adore. Perhaps because I can relate to it in so many ways.

The imagery is lovely, and you master your words in such a beautiful way. I really can't find much else to say, other than applaud...

I'll look forward to reading more of your work.
E.D chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
So wistful, but (not to offend) I like your other poems better, especially "light kisses" I don't know, I've read too many poems (and am guilty of writing too many poems) that are just too much like this. Searching, finding the one...counting stars...will we recongize each other when we meet? I guess the magic fades after a while.

Still, very beautiful piece, short and lovely. I hope you keep writing your poems I've missed them for a long time!

rebecca
Maggy May Clark chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
I loved it, everything is so true, well atleast to me. good work!1