Reviews for Response Poem to: Perforated Lines
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
very nice metaphor
catseyeview chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
I love this...I can feel the page tear! This is quite beautiful in its own right.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
ah, nice metaphors!
Angel Underneath chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
o i like! very nice, short and simple but with meaning! good good good!