Reviews for Untitled
Kuzuki Sugimorii chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
If I had to give this a title, I'd probably call it "Until Death", but I think it's better without a title. It seems more refined that way to me.
Darlingdeath chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
Amazing! Its beautiful. Might i suggest for your title "Contemplation of Surrender"
CostumeForAGutterball chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
call it 'Would You...?'-a recurring question within the poem makes for a good title...very kool stuff you've got posted...I agree it's damn tough to come up with titles for poems and such...most of the time I'll live mine 'Untitled' until I get something...great writing!
Happy-Platipus chapter 1 . 1/16/2005
I like the way you expressed this conflict and these worries...
Dark Lalage chapter 1 . 1/11/2005
i luvs it Kat! yays i actuaaly came here! its been so long. neways i think yous should name it Surrender cause thats what its mainly about and u even call it that i think twice(begining and end)( i tink) anyways its beautifully written and very real u are becoming a great writer! u should have a book! lots of loveCacique
Jezebel Malice chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
Surrender

maybei liked this a lot.i hope everyhtings alright.
Tarlok chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
That was extremely well written, with a beautiful point. Great job on it. As for possible titles, I think a good title would be..

Tainted Heart Aflame