|Reviews for Eshonnoec|
| SirGwain chapter 11 . 2/16/2005
Its going great and not too fast paced...Kinda improve the grammar a little. Aside from that, i loved the idea of introducing a new character. Keep up the good work
| SirGwain chapter 6 . 1/16/2005
Great, the last chapter was especially good. I liked how you narrated it with ease. Loved the idea of the plains. The plot is coming along fine and how have no need to rush it...Update soon
| SirGwain chapter 3 . 1/13/2005
Great, and great. You are setting up the plot really well... I'm liking it more and more.
So about the detail...Well, you should detail the people and landscape. Make people see the world you are seeing while writing your story. I know we can never make ppl see exactly what wë're thinking when writing but try. For example you could have described the bar, and the night in chap2.
Anyway, its not like i know how to do what im telling you to do, but i try. Please update soon, this story just keeps gettin better and better
| SirGwain chapter 2 . 1/11/2005
Good, even great but you need to elaborate your writing a bit more. The beggining of chap one was kinda dull even though i liked the idea...Try to detail more..The idea is good, the writing good but its all about the its very entertaining