|Reviews for A Chained Sanity|
| JaCk 0 D1AmOnDSs chapter 1 . 3/14/2005
THAT WAS CONFUSING MAN CHANGE THE FORMAT... NOW! BUT OTHERWISE GOOD SHIT... BUT CHANGE THE FORMAT
| Rose Vicious chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
I finally got to read it DJ... and damn, all I have to say. I've actually never read anything in first person so this would be the first, and it was quite interesting. The repetition of I got on my nerves a few times, but hell, this is what a review is for, praise and critisicing.
Good story, better read than told about, your spoken versions continuously had confusing gaps. We should talk about editing the grammer like paragraphs and stuff. Make it look longer *grin*
- Rose. AKA Dood!
| gypsylass chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
hm its different. i think it's going to be good! keep it up!