FUCK YOU! ya right! forgive are you kidding! I'll fucking murder you! That was a very bad first impression Landon...

I'm glad I read this story. It was phenomenal. I'm pretty sad because, you know, it's a sad story, but also because there's no sequel up, but it's been eight years, so I'll give up on that xD I didn't read the preview because I'm afraid that I'll only want a sequel more _ Anyway, thanks for writing!

that was so beautiful and touching :)

Where is sequel? :(

hehehe i it

i this tory hehe

awh thats sad for clara and i love thisstory

I totally loved your story! As soon as I started reading it I could not stop myself! It was just fabulous! Your writing is great (though there's some slight mistakes but not too noticeable ones that can be over-seen)and your plot was hypnotizing! Now I'm really looking forward towards the sequel! Please, please, please, pretty please! Can you post the sequel soon?

( By the way, I don't usually review stories often and just review those that really catch my attention. So you can be really proud of your story! ;) )

Thanks for this wonderful story!

Kairi

I really liked this story, and I'm kinda sad to see that the sequeal wasn't posted yet. :/ It's been about seven years? TT

Anyways, I enjoy reading this story and hope your still able to finish writing the sequeal. We'll be waiting~

What happened to 'A New Book'? Damn it, I wanted to read that. _

yay im ur hundreth reviewer! unless someone beats me to it while im typing this up. really good story so far. i lov it.

I noticed that alot of the words you have trouble with.

Mussels are a shell fish, muscles is how you spell it.

Whipped is like whipped cream, its actually wiped.

Mourning is what people do when someone dies, its morning.

Knew is when someone knows something, its new.

You seem to confuse words that are said the same but spelled differently most of all. I dont want to be mean or anything so you know :D just trying to help!

Love the story and characters. However...your spelling is horrible, some basic read threws would fix many of the small errors, or just running it through a spell check.

wow. like wow. this was pretty awesome i mean just cuz of all the diff characters and everything. i like SERIOUSLY want to read the sequel! are u gonna reintroduce some old characters? cuz that'd be awesome. personally i favor landon XD poor shawn. i hope his roller coaster ride finally calms down a bit more later :)

I was looking for this story...and if you still go on this website are you going to post the story up anytime soon?