xHannahx chapter 1 . 1/16/2005
wow. i love the speed of that. the caps makes it run and thats soo cool. this is amazing. the pattern of the words is soo good.

incandescent.smiles chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
i'm so sorry(!)i haven't reveiwed for you in awhile. this was so good, the big, bold letters really helped to get the point across. i really like it, sorry again

MiggsThompson chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
This is a really cool flood of ideas and verbal symbolism. Even though the format wasn't traditional, I could follow your line of thought through the poetic rhythm without breaking up the progression of thoughts. If I may join my parent's generation for a moment: "Neato!" Keep writing!
Shadowed Mind chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
i love the raw emotion in this, a perfect representation of society and the pretenses they hide behind. keep writing. all my love, shadowed mind
angel-of-woe chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
great i luved it all! keep it up _
Keith Andrew chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
Very good alex. So much emotion. I like it. I love you , never forget-Keith Andrew