Reviews for Spiral Staircase
TeamPoser101 chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
wow this really gets mind going. almost hypnotizing lol. but great story
Newt Salamander chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
I love the feeling of the poem. Very good description of things. They make the poem seemed 'real'. Good job.
Rozlin chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
hahaha i was the first to read and now the first to review!
Good Lady Grace chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
This is a very powerful well written poem. I love it. It just has so much feeling and depth in it. Keep writing!Your obedient friend,Good Lady Grace
silentscreamer07 chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
oh wow! Nice one! little gruesome. mwa haha..i liked it.
retaliation chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
for some reason, i found this very funny. i was laughing when he sliped and started rolling, but ya...its good
Panchromatic chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
ergh. very in depth. ow. poor guy.
astro-traveling-angel chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
I think you are a grate writer and here is shown the ability to work!
inquistrix chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
i'm a huge fan of free verse, but this is done very well. i like you you create the "atmosphere" of his pending death, i think you might want to go over your poem and make sure to stick to that atmosphere. kudos to you