Reviews for Lime Street to Cleethorpes, One Change
hahahahahaha chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
I thought it was a bit too long and, well, draggy. But I guess that could add to the effect of a train ride. Short, nice passing descriptions.

p.s. do review some of my works would you )
catseyeview chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
I love the whole poem but absolutely fell in love with the stanza, "I buy a soothing drink, a hot chocolate, just because of the way the hills look." What this says and how we live our lives as such, for the postitive and negative which frames our pictures.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
longer than ur usual. but nice.