|Reviews for Lime Street to Cleethorpes, One Change|
| hahahahahaha chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
I thought it was a bit too long and, well, draggy. But I guess that could add to the effect of a train ride. Short, nice passing descriptions.
p.s. do review some of my works would you )
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
I love the whole poem but absolutely fell in love with the stanza, "I buy a soothing drink, a hot chocolate, just because of the way the hills look." What this says and how we live our lives as such, for the postitive and negative which frames our pictures.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
longer than ur usual. but nice.