|Reviews for Be It Unchained|
| SliversofSilverPain chapter 1 . 8/31/2005
very eloquent, very nicely put... I like it, very pretty, sweet and hopeful. Nice
| krystalpendragon chapter 1 . 6/16/2005
great job, i liked how it was kinda simple, stated nicely. ~laterz
| Plato's Socialist Democracy chapter 1 . 1/30/2005
Tartarus holds it in its clutches too long for any to hold their breath, but by generations it lives in this temple if no where else.
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
The yearning is so felt here.
| Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
So much truth in this.
Few words make a point that should be heard by everyone.
"Love, be it unchained"
| Amaranth of Grey chapter 1 . 1/16/2005
thought provoking. So concise and artistic. I enjoyed. A beautiful haiku. Keep up the good work.
| Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
Awesome... I know that feeling which you have in you while pouring this onto paper. Man, I've felt so much like that lately. Good work.
| godawful teen-angst poetry chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
lovely, as always. your poetry is so...graceful? I don't think that's the word I'm looking for, but it will do for now. Keep writing, please.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
I love this haiku so much. :D It's so deep and adorable. X3 Kawaii~! -
~ Noelle ~
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
::sigh:: very well written.. I love that last line
| Frosted Midnight chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
very short , very sweet , i liked it!
| Koriina chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
| Joewhatever chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
I'm not a fan of haikus really...but I liked this. Nice write.