Reviews for Be It Unchained
SliversofSilverPain chapter 1 . 8/31/2005
very eloquent, very nicely put... I like it, very pretty, sweet and hopeful. Nice
krystalpendragon chapter 1 . 6/16/2005
great job, i liked how it was kinda simple, stated nicely. laterz
Plato's Socialist Democracy chapter 1 . 1/30/2005
Tartarus holds it in its clutches too long for any to hold their breath, but by generations it lives in this temple if no where else.

Love unchained,PSD
catseyeview chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
The yearning is so felt here.
Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
So much truth in this.

Few words make a point that should be heard by everyone.

"Love, be it unchained"

Exceptional!

KEEP WRITING!

F.C
Amaranth of Grey chapter 1 . 1/16/2005
thought provoking. So concise and artistic. I enjoyed. A beautiful haiku. Keep up the good work.
Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
Awesome... I know that feeling which you have in you while pouring this onto paper. Man, I've felt so much like that lately. Good work.
godawful teen-angst poetry chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
lovely, as always. your poetry is so...graceful? I don't think that's the word I'm looking for, but it will do for now. Keep writing, please.

lyv
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
I love this haiku so much. :D It's so deep and adorable. X3 Kawaii! -

Noelle
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
::sigh:: very well written.. I love that last line
Frosted Midnight chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
very short , very sweet , i liked it!
Koriina chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
:D
Joewhatever chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
I'm not a fan of haikus really...but I liked this. Nice write.