Reviews for Ebb Tide
Ghostmaan chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
I like your style, smackalalalaIt is very unique. Myself, if I were to write about your subject, I'd have dragged it into a very long you structure your verses in a very resumed way, going directly into what you mean to say. It is nice.
myno chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
You're lacking punctuation, but apart from that, this is quite good. You waste no words in getting the idea across.
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
Great comparison