|Reviews for The Institution of Marriage|
| Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 3/3/2005
heh, really now? lol interesting lil poem, dunno how accurate it is
| addie pray chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
Biting, loved it. Well done.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
lol Clever. I really enjoyed this.
* Noelle *
| Crazy Biene chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
Everywhere I go I always see this "Institution of Marriage" and I finally decided to read it. To be honest I did not get it...maybe its cz I am far from getting married and I have no clue about nething...lol. I mean what do you expect from a silly 14 yr old? Lol
| Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
you're the CUTEST!
BTW Squirrelmail is BROKEN! So, contact me thru
How are you? I MISS you!
I thought of you in a dream in a way.
NO, not THAT way *giggles* .. just .. the name of you town .. and a revelation.
MIAMI ... that is an M followed by IAMI ... or I am I! like God called himself "I am that I am!" and M for Mother, Mystery, Sea! Mary/Mari comes from mer, sea! And mer rhymes with mare ... horse! and horses lead Poseiden, they represent sea foam! and Miami is by the ocean!
I think I was told this to give to you so you can write a poem for your city! So, please use it!
luv, your net-pal FOREVER, John
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
| WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
yeah, i'm never getting married, athough its for other reasons than just this.
| DOORphrame chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
Good look on marriage. It kind of sucks, doesnt it?
| WigginBro chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
But why would anyone want to when it works so perfectly in this context? Clever idea, indeed. I would like to suggest developing it a little more-also, I think it would work better if it rhymed. Amusing premise, though.
| ossining chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
LOL, that is so true. I can't believe I never thought of that before. You are so insightful.