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astral boy chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
again, very nice. you have a way of keeping things simple and inviting for the reader, i like it. i think these would actually make great songs.
ossining chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
Interesante. The repeating is very unique. Thanks for your review of my poem. (I go under both smackalicious and smackalalala.)
Rocky G chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
Interesting poem, I like how it debates its self very clever. I enjoyed reading your work.

Rocky
The Random Witness chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
simple format yet Deep! Do i know this person who you *shouldn't* love? (",) lol...ami
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
Wow, what a great poem! I can completely relate. The repetition works very nicely in this poem! Well done!