"studded with silver-lined holes"

Just so you know, they're called gromits. _-

Wow this is really really good! Please keep it up I want..no need to see what happens!

ok i love the two chapter there where great i love your writing too. you have a good flar about your writing that makes the whole story sounds so good. i can't wait to see was going to happen please upload soon.

this is a good chapter also seen like things keep getting worst for Ri'Tai' I don't like Lyetaen though or his father

Wow! I love this chapter too I still feel so sad for Ri'Tia and the women that's on the ship. I would go mad if saw what they did there hubsands thrown off the ships into the whirlpool. i love this chapter to keep it up

Oh my gosh! this sounds so sad I can't believe what happen to Ri'Tai and Rayk I actually thought Ri'Tai was going to accept Rayk hand and marriage. I feel so sorry for Ri'Tai losing her father and friends and plus Rayk. this is a good beginning to a good story

AW! I totally loved this chapter! are Ri'Tai and Lyetaen going to have sex? O! lol update soon.

Very, very interesting. Please continue the story. I find this...world...of yours very entertaining. I love your Draygons and the whole "enslavement of the human race". You've a wonderful style. If you get a chance R&R my stories, please.

Aw...I really liked the update! I like how Paia wanted Ri'tai to braid her hair that was cute! Can't wait for more! Please update soon!~adders~

loving your new story, please update soon!

nice chp...update soon _BL

*sing song* UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE LA-LA-LA-LA!

Very good. Well written, too. Wil definately look out for further chapters.

Hey Lee,I like how this story is going. It's interesting and unlike anything I have read before! The only thing is that these chapters seem so much shorter than chapter of your other Lee I can't wait to read more of this

oh i like it! please update soon!