|Reviews for Bloodline|
| Tomako Briefs chapter 5 . 2/3/2005
"studded with silver-lined holes"
Just so you know, they're called gromits. _-
| ForestYoukai chapter 5 . 2/3/2005
Wow this is really really good! Please keep it up I want..no need to see what happens!
| Poetrybay chapter 5 . 2/3/2005
ok i love the two chapter there where great i love your writing too. you have a good flar about your writing that makes the whole story sounds so good. i can't wait to see was going to happen please upload soon.
| Poetrybay chapter 3 . 2/3/2005
this is a good chapter also seen like things keep getting worst for Ri'Tai' I don't like Lyetaen though or his father
| Poetrybay chapter 2 . 2/3/2005
Wow! I love this chapter too I still feel so sad for Ri'Tia and the women that's on the ship. I would go mad if saw what they did there hubsands thrown off the ships into the whirlpool. i love this chapter to keep it up
| Poetrybay chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
Oh my gosh! this sounds so sad I can't believe what happen to Ri'Tai and Rayk I actually thought Ri'Tai was going to accept Rayk hand and marriage. I feel so sorry for Ri'Tai losing her father and friends and plus Rayk. this is a good beginning to a good story
| inconditusgauis chapter 5 . 2/3/2005
AW! I totally loved this chapter! are Ri'Tai and Lyetaen going to have sex? O! lol update soon.
| unbridledfear chapter 5 . 2/3/2005
Very, very interesting. Please continue the story. I find this...world...of yours very entertaining. I love your Draygons and the whole "enslavement of the human race". You've a wonderful style. If you get a chance R&R my stories, please.
| Adders721 chapter 5 . 2/3/2005
Aw...I really liked the update! I like how Paia wanted Ri'tai to braid her hair that was cute! Can't wait for more! Please update soon!~adders~
| koolaidrocks chapter 5 . 2/3/2005
loving your new story, please update soon!
| FireDragonBL chapter 5 . 2/3/2005
nice chp...update soon _BL
| inconditusgauis chapter 4 . 2/2/2005
*sing song* UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE LA-LA-LA-LA!
| A Crazy Elephant chapter 4 . 1/31/2005
Very good. Well written, too. Wil definately look out for further chapters.
| Vanessa chapter 4 . 1/31/2005
Hey Lee,I like how this story is going. It's interesting and unlike anything I have read before! The only thing is that these chapters seem so much shorter than chapter of your other Lee I can't wait to read more of this
| kali chapter 4 . 1/29/2005
oh i like it! please update soon!