Reviews for Bloodline
Hotkitty chapter 4 . 1/29/2005
Poor ri'tai.. i feel realli bad 4 her. i hope evrything will get better 4 her soon. its a bit annoying about the whole language difference tho, how r they menat 2 talk! grrh... lol. im sure u'll sort sumthing out eventualli!
Trinity of Dreams chapter 4 . 1/28/2005
update soon
Kura-sama chapter 4 . 1/28/2005
I like his sister She seems very cute. And Lye is liking his new "pet" a lot isn't he? heheh, can't wait for more! Update soon~
Cowgurl4God chapter 4 . 1/27/2005
Keep writing it sounds interesting.I truly do love it, I'm just not normally good with words.
Lost-in-dark chapter 4 . 1/27/2005
Ri Tai is cool...i love her name and I hope Paia doesn't do something rash...This is such a wicked story! } cya...
Descendant of Darkness chapter 4 . 1/27/2005
Once again luv the chapter! R u going to have a romantic realtionship bloom for Ri'Tai and Lyetaen and did you make up their names?
Wild Child chapter 4 . 1/27/2005
YAY! hehe paia is funny I like her... Lyetaen is interesting...
raniaur chapter 4 . 1/27/2005
Very intresting...

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
Adders721 chapter 4 . 1/27/2005
Aw...I like! I think the Paia is funny! Can't wait for more! I like how Lyetaen brought her to his bed it was sweet. please update soon please!~adders~
FireDragonBL chapter 4 . 1/27/2005
UH, so draygons are essentially humans with dragon wings and pumped up muscles?

lol, good chapter...

update soon _

-BL
Descendant of Darkness chapter 3 . 1/24/2005
I thought I would hate the son in the first chapter, but I liked him at first sight. Oh, and I just wanted to say great chapter!
Lost-in-dark chapter 3 . 1/24/2005
draygons and pets and swords o my! hehehe, nice story, it's really good! I really like Ri Tai, she's really cool. poor her though, wonder whats going to happen. PLEZE hurry and up-date soon so I can find out }
Hotkitty chapter 3 . 1/24/2005
lol, i like lytaen, tho im not usualli 2 keen on guys with goates but we'll see...lol...UPDATE SOON AND REMEMBER 2 EMAIL ME. btw i luv the offspring song, im obsessed lol.
Hotkitty chapter 2 . 1/24/2005
omg i had no idea u'd updated. my laerts havent been working! i'll read the next chappie as soon as i can and email me wen u update, 4 now i have 2 catch up on sum other stuff b4 i read the next chappie!
Kura-sama chapter 3 . 1/23/2005
Aw that was so cute ... Lyetaen doesn't seem too bad. Falling more and more in love with the story by the chapter~ Write more soon! Can't wait
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