Reviews for Bloodline
raniaur chapter 3 . 1/23/2005
hm... Interesting. Keep going. What kind of pet? How could she be his pet, when she couldn't understand him? Very interesting... UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
Wild Child with a Twist chapter 3 . 1/23/2005
lol, I love this story even though I don't know about the tails but sure its all good. . .
Adders721 chapter 3 . 1/23/2005
I really like your story! Can't wait for more! Please update soon!~adders~
kiki chapter 3 . 1/23/2005
OMG! OMG! I am in love with your story! I absoluteley love it! Who can't? Update soon! Screw you for making us wait on the next update for this amazing stoy! (no offense intended) UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!*ahem* Please?
ASLee chapter 3 . 1/23/2005
wow! awesome! write more! i especially like the foreshadowing!
FireDragonBL chapter 3 . 1/23/2005
Wow, this is a great story, love your style...

sad beginning though, but that's what makes this so interesting...a complete turn of events...

your writing is very might want to give more scriptions of the I really cant tell what they look like, except they have long claws and have wings...

about Ri'Tai...I'd think her fighting skills would be slightly more formidable...even against lage foes...if she really has any skill...

I look forward to the next chapter...

my em is

Lorok chapter 3 . 1/23/2005
I like this story. But do you think you could give a better description of what Draygons look like in general. I can't tell wheather they are humans with scaly wings and tails or dragons with hair. Thank you, can't wait for the next chapter.
Tomako Briefs chapter 3 . 1/23/2005
That was actually sort of cute. _
inconditusgauis chapter 2 . 1/17/2005
Bloody hell, this story burns me with it's complete awesomeness. I wish I had your skillz truely I do. I will kill you if you don't update. I'm sitting here right now trying to think what could happen next. Please, please, update soon. I am dying here.
Kura-sama chapter 2 . 1/16/2005
I wanna read mooree~~ Love it!
raniaur chapter 2 . 1/16/2005
Interesting... Keep going. I like it. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
Autumn-Rose1942 chapter 1 . 1/16/2005
wow, this is really good! plz keep writing and update soon! : )
UMIFIREFLY15 chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
this is interesting. I'd like to see where you're going with this. Keep writing.
Hotkitty chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
OMG POOR RAYK! I liked rayk, this is realli gud! update soon!
Danrilor chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
I like this story. It has a good exposition and portrayal of the conflict. It is a little more action packed than is typical of your writing, which is a good thing. I look forward to the next chapter.
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