Reviews for Bloodline |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hm... Interesting. Keep going. What kind of pet? How could she be his pet, when she couldn't understand him? Very interesting... UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, I love this story even though I don't know about the tails but sure its all good. . . |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like your story! Can't wait for more! Please update soon!~adders~ |
![]() ![]() OMG! OMG! I am in love with your story! I absoluteley love it! Who can't? Update soon! Screw you for making us wait on the next update for this amazing stoy! (no offense intended) UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!*ahem* Please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! awesome! write more! i especially like the foreshadowing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is a great story, love your style... sad beginning though, but that's what makes this so interesting...a complete turn of events... your writing is very solid...you might want to give more scriptions of the Draygons...as I really cant tell what they look like, except they have long claws and have wings... about Ri'Tai...I'd think her fighting skills would be slightly more formidable...even against lage foes...if she really has any skill... I look forward to the next chapter... my em is -BL |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story. But do you think you could give a better description of what Draygons look like in general. I can't tell wheather they are humans with scaly wings and tails or dragons with hair. Thank you, can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was actually sort of cute. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bloody hell, this story burns me with it's complete awesomeness. I wish I had your skillz truely I do. I will kill you if you don't update. I'm sitting here right now trying to think what could happen next. Please, please, update soon. I am dying here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wanna read mooree~~ Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting... Keep going. I like it. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, this is really good! plz keep writing and update soon! : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is interesting. I'd like to see where you're going with this. Keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG POOR RAYK! I liked rayk, this is realli gud! update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story. It has a good exposition and portrayal of the conflict. It is a little more action packed than is typical of your writing, which is a good thing. I look forward to the next chapter. |