Reviews for Pain
Infinite Abyss chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
Great poem.
Ambyr chapter 1 . 3/18/2005
Your words speak truth.
SomeCowgirl chapter 1 . 1/16/2005
That was very visual. Good imagery if not a little creepy. I used to feel like I was in hell, so I can kind of relate.
Amelia Grant chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
wonderful job. though the last line is a little too long, it's a great poem!