|Reviews for beach fun|
| hahahahahaha chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
What a splashing first line that diffuses into a wonderfully crafted poem! Love the word choice.
| HideAwayFairy chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
Whoa, this is really good. You are a great poet, you have a sort of writing that's very unique, I really love it!
| reicheru chapter 1 . 1/24/2005
hahass. sorry havent reviewed for so long. like the comparison between the first and last stanzas. ohoh and the grandpa sun part. hahass. uhh. and the part that sounds like the milo ad.
yeah. why does everyone give such cheem reviews anyway? makes me feel small and insignificant. hahass. very nice and uh. flow-ey?
| linaeve chapter 1 . 1/24/2005
oh lovely. enjoyed the not-symmetry & perfect word-use; the imagery was stunning & ohso vivid.
"sunloved water"- brilliant.
| really chapter 1 . 1/16/2005
all i can say is wow. and that i love your style.
(hey look it rhymes)never thought i'd be a poetwriting fancy riddlesjust stories weavedentangled and enmeshed.
| negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
loved it loved it and still do. i jive to your poemgroove and feel your geniusvibes. descriptive impeccability. -kismet.