Reviews for my prince
poetic heretic chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
This poem is just too cool! My favorite line is "black eyes like tainted pearls / nestled at the bottom of the sea"...very very very beautiful imagery!

Keep writing...or else!

Haha

D

Peace~
purplepants chapter 1 . 4/28/2007
i really like this, especially the lines "daddy, mommy,/don't be mad/i've been a good girl/a really, really good girl". my only critique is that some of the repetition feels clumsy and i don't think it works for this. nice job, keep writing.
Sheets chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
"please?

my prince

take me away from this place

ride away in to the night

please?"

I love this, how you establish everything so well. It's almost like you've... Padron the clique... Painted a picture... And, yet, you haven't.
Dee Dub chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
I love this. It's very creepy and mesmerizing.
Bleeding Ink chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
He reminds me of a vampire.. very hot and desirable. But not containing much love or life. The feeling you put into this poem was just so tangible.
Tayciamo chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
is that sexual?in any case, very seximo my dear. very seximo
Hermoics chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
Well all I have to say is... wow. That was another great one. I really like that, please, part in there. Keep it up. Aneways Love Hermoics
apromptedpoet chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
Well you know how I am with romance. Seriously. But I do like this.

There's something about this boy you're describing that...Man it makes me shiver! Creepy, but in a satisfying way.

I liked this. Good Job.

Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting