Reviews for Dead On Arrival
shadowedstar213 chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
aw... so sad... is this a true story or is it fiction?
Stories-have-souls chapter 1 . 1/16/2005
Aww...sob...such a sad, emotional, fantastically written story...probably my fav out of all of yours so far...sob...
RipYoUrFaCeOuT chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
Dang Kattie... this is the second most saddest story ever. I'm so serious. :'(

Aight...

Many Tears sista.
DOORphrame chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
I didn't know thats what they call people when they arrive dead. Good idea, and nice writing.
t3h omgz chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
That was short, yet it captures the sadness and emotion so well.
One Desire chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
Is the title from a Fallout Boy song? Just wonderins, cause there's a song called Dead on Arrival by Fallout Boy...okay, well I'm done.
Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
Probably the shortest short story I have read. So sad...yet you did a very nice job of capturing one's feelings as they realize their life as they knew it was changed in one horrid instant. The description of what was running though her mind was pretty good. I think you could have added a bit more with the senses, but you seemed to capture mood and death nicely. Good write.