Reviews for Smeared Purity
less-than-imperfect chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
... i can't think of much right now but i'll think up of a good comeback... sooner or later.
firemounrain chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
You don't make your situation very clear to the reader. I actually like your summary better than the poem, and I really can't tell where they're connected.