i really like this story. it's very descriptive and detailed. i can imagine all of the scenes in my mind. please update very soon.

I have been reading your other story and thought that I would read this one. This story is as amazing as your other one. This is the first non-cliche vampire story I have ever read. Also the sexual tension between Nicholas and Emma is electrifying. Please update soon. :)

Konnichiwa, I'm reading another one of your amazingly cool stories. This one is pretty cool too. It must be hard to be writing two good stories at the same time. I just wished you'd update this one too. I enjoy vampire stories. Who was that guy who attacked Emma? Was he just some random vampire? Because he was like : They said...blah. So who was he referring to? The vampires living with her? or random vampires off the street. Can't wait to read more of it.

I am reading this story of yours as well. I hope you don't drop one of them, because they are both awesome! good job...plee continue soon!

oo...creepy guy. that's one way to get a pretty new vampire girl!

aww... sweet young lovers... with..a twist. emma's quite cute. nicholas has an interesting taste in food. criminals.. but at least he's doin' the city some good in the process, oddly enough, but still..that's a LOT of dead people

It's a beautiful are quite a writer.

hmm...quite interesting.

Wow. Beautifully written. Keep it up! :)