Reviews for Lies
Little Miss Shadow chapter 1 . 2/5/2003
The flow was a bit rocky with alternateing from a ryming pattern to the opposite. But I personally really enjoyed it. I liked the transitions from "I" to "They" and back again in each stanza. Very well put together with a well-versed point. :)
sinister velvet chapter 1 . 10/30/2001
parent/kid thingy? Anyway, good poem.
Jezchan chapter 1 . 1/26/2001
Once again. My God! Very good! You really know how to get into the head of the reader! (at least mine)
dEmEntEd signed review chapter 1 . 1/18/2001
pretti good