Reviews for Saint Artemuis, School for Girls?
bluspirit chapter 17 . 6/13/2005
hey just gotta say this is a really good story. it would be so cool if it turned into a real anime series! )ill be waiting for the next few chapters to come so keep up the good work
furei chapter 16 . 6/12/2005
Heya Nell I'm actually reviewing, omg. Anyway, yeah, this is teh Frey-zors here and I have a small complaint- You are focusing too much on Akii and her randomness. She is a good character, but if you continue to make her such a mood swingy emotional wreak I will seriously start to wonder why she hasn't been put in an institution. Or have a personal therapist. Or allowed to school. Focus more on the smaller characters, not just the big ones. For instance, as some reviewers mentioned, they would like to see more of Damien. A good insight of Neave would be appreciated as well, because random sleep patterns doesn't mean that she is still amazingly mood swingy. Focus on her and Southi's friendship as well, Noel shouldn't be such a barrier.

But most importantly- the story focuses around the boys, not the girls. The girls are secondary characters to the boys; and while it's good to add the girls perspective on things, you are beginning to forget about the boys and their opinions and how they view things in the school, which is most important as main characters/the reason for the story in the first place.
Akai-MS chapter 15 . 6/10/2005
I feel so bad for Southi, to choose between ur duties or ur love, KYU! Then their's Emily's whole problem with Takashi...and then theirs Kat. GOD!
Akai-MS chapter 16 . 6/10/2005
OH MY GOD! That was so funny at first, so so funny, but then...that bastard Yuki had to come and ruin everything...I also think he should die...but then it got funny again! YAH! Although I don't know who to feel sorry for Akii or the turtle? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Crazy Ayame chapter 16 . 6/8/2005
I wuv your story!
xbluxmoonx chapter 16 . 6/7/2005
OMG,this is so cute!I love reading your story. It has the most random stuff and i luv it! Anyways, so far I have really enjoyed reading your story, and I hope if Damian is going to start liking someone. Cuz that would be cute! Anyways, I hope you update soon cuz i want to know what happens! Anywho...

salt chapter 16 . 6/7/2005
I really like how all the personalitys are coming out! Please more on Jin/Magic and Damian! I love this story so whenever you have time PLEASE update!
remmyalamode chapter 16 . 6/6/2005
…a little waterworks, sum romance on the ice rink and a frying pan…lol, very very guud chapter. …think you could add anymore Jin/Magic parts in the next chapie? ~Wisdoms
shibi chibi chapter 16 . 6/6/2005
we...akii is just so cool! _
Illeander chapter 16 . 6/6/2005
I love Akii! When are you going to bring out Damian's character? He seems like a really nice guy...
lilleo chapter 16 . 6/6/2005
hehe great story - very amusing, i love akii's personality even if it is a little unexplainable at times sounds like me hyper! you shound deff keep this going. i look forward to the next update :D
Salt chapter 16 . 6/6/2005
Awesome story please keep updating
xbluxmoonx chapter 4 . 6/5/2005
Very funny, can't wait to read more!
xbluxmoonx chapter 2 . 6/5/2005
this is so funny, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Katsui Adonis chapter 16 . 6/5/2005
I liked this chapter..It was a good one. 'Specially since we kinda see a side Akii other than randomness.
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