Reviews for Black Horizon
SaveMeToo chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
:(It's true, look at all the lost people. I know I'm one. Sometimes it's the despare that cruses us and takes our dreams and hopes away, bringing so many more fears and despretness. Who dosn't want a home, wants to fit in, wants to feel cared and loved for when all you can see is the blackness engulfing you to you drownd in it? If I wern't so pesimistic, the exact opposit of what I usto be, I would say the Little Boy may find his way home. But right now, I'm not sure. However, even when yo fell lost, there's usually someone else getting lost trying to help you get no so lost.

*Amber*
Mango Motercycle chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
mallory this was soo good it made me shiver...*me shivering*...lol...oh the symbolism and profound thoughts! love it...great job!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
nice repition.. can be taken literaly or metaphorically
Pineapple Dreams chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
Hello! his is a really great poem. It would also be a very good song, i think. Well written. i love the rhymes and the picture this poem puts across is very beautiful!