|Reviews for Dust and Spice|
| Linnet chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
I love all the feelings and images that you've combined here...creates a lovely feeling and vision.
| Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
This is beautiful. I love how little things can aspire us to write, like this bushfire. I think the way you created the poem to bring together all the senses but sight. Wonderful. Bravo once again.
| David Stephen chapter 1 . 4/18/2005
I love the way you describe the moon as dusty, and the air as spicey. I love the last line - referring to death and its evil laughter. I can really picture this calm scene, with dancing shadows and a eerily shining, radiant moon, dusty to the smoke. Beautiful. ~DS~ *favourites!*
| Unknown Unnamed chapter 1 . 1/24/2005
Weird... you gave me a craving for something cinnamonny. Reminds me of that sweet smell I have after I've been to a bonfire. M...
P.S. Thanks for reviewing!
| keltica chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
Dreamlike portrait! Takes more than reading to understand it :) ... keltica
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
I love the last line. I just love it. - A well written haiku and really well written. - Good job !
~* Noelle *~
| pleasecometrue chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
The first line 'The moon is dusty' really caught my attention. Good write ;)
| godawful teen-angst poetry chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
Oh, man-it's you!revival of the old-timers. hooray.
I lovelovelove the last two lines.