Reviews for I'm Sorry
emily chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
a very interesting poem full of heartfelt emotion. well done
Shadowed Mind chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
i love this, coz i know what its like to feel like you're hurting someone and all they do is lie to you, pretending that you're something youre not. but remember to look at the fact that they must love you, because they've ridden this rollercoaster with you and refuse to get off...all my love, shadowed mind
hedyd4u chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
I can really get a sense of the pain here. The only thing is it feels more like a letter than a poem. I think you should go deeper into the feelings, try to picture what they look like. This may help you find the root of the problem. It is very raw and open.

Good job,

hedyd4u
xHannahx chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
aw man, its so hard to feel this way. theres a lot of emotion there, and its really raw. nice job,

Han.
Galadh Niniel chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
The emotions expressed are very intense, and I can relate to a lot of this. Sometimes it is harder for us to forgive ourselves than to forgive others and than it is for the others to frogive us ... *hugs*
Kressida chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
this is great alex, you can just feel the emotion and the sadness, adn i love it! it's fantastic, i love it! love you, zai
Keith Andrew chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
hm...thats rathe depressing. Well i guess when you love someone you do. I dont think its quite as bad as you make it out to be. I man i should know. This is a very good piece except its not true, but anyway, good work-keith andrew, ps i love you