Reviews for slice
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
Good poem, I hate it when people don't listen to you, x weasel within x
Joey7691 chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
Sad and angsty. A great piece.
Morbid Maxwell chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
Very dark makes for very interesting. It may seem morbid, but I like reading about suicide and stuff like that...rape, incest, etc. and I don't freak. Maybe I should change my name to Morbid Maxwell...anywho, I loved your poem and will probably read youir others. Keep up the awesome work.

"Morbid" Masochist Maxwell
AllyCred chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
really liked this it was dark and seemed to come from a depressing state, but i have to say i can identify with this alot and it flowed very well, i especially liked the structure. lots of love AllyCred