Reviews for My Shattered Heart
lifelessbreath chapter 1 . 6/19/2006
This was lovely and beautiful.

Ryenon chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
that was so great! Very sad and it made me really feel like I should just walk up and hug you. keep up the great work!
EWindheim chapter 1 . 2/8/2005
*claps* Beautiful! I have such appreciation for Haikus, for they seem to me to be a more challenging form of poetry. You've done very well with this one. ~Hawke (aka Fiontari)
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
I have definitely felt this way before...nicely put!
Derrick Edgar James chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
A great Haiku. This is a place I'm sure most have been at one point and this sums the feeling up quite adequately.
Whatever-I-Say chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
Wow...very powerful poem, you've got talent. ~Keep writing!
Obsidian Eyes chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
David Stephen chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
Wow - I love this. It is so truthful and wrote with a certain passion which is engrounded in the fluid constraints of Haiku form. Masterly done! ~DS~
Emerald Lynne Stonne chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
I feel haiku's are hard to do... because you are limited to so many words that you have to put so much emotion into... but you really pulled it off! This is written EXTREMELY well! Great Job!

God Bless,~Emmy
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
Embolism clots,

Heart break's blood burst forth now blots,

Gambling love, lost lots. -m-
Jacob Andrews chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
A bit too shallow, to be honest... short and concise can go too far. You need words to truly convey sorry.
Unknown Unnamed chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
I really like this. I've become rather fond of haikus... And this one was very good.
The System Mother chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
That's deep. I can't write haiku... but you brought it together nicely.