This was lovely and beautiful.

~Jill~

that was so great! Very sad and it made me really feel like I should just walk up and hug you. keep up the great work!

*claps* Beautiful! I have such appreciation for Haikus, for they seem to me to be a more challenging form of poetry. You've done very well with this one. ~Hawke (aka Fiontari)

I have definitely felt this way before...nicely put!

A great Haiku. This is a place I'm sure most have been at one point and this sums the feeling up quite adequately.

Wow...very powerful poem, you've got talent. ~Keep writing!

Beautiful

Wow - I love this. It is so truthful and wrote with a certain passion which is engrounded in the fluid constraints of Haiku form. Masterly done! ~DS~

I feel haiku's are hard to do... because you are limited to so many words that you have to put so much emotion into... but you really pulled it off! This is written EXTREMELY well! Great Job!

God Bless,~Emmy

Embolism clots,

Heart break's blood burst forth now blots,

Gambling love, lost lots. -m-

A bit too shallow, to be honest... short and concise can go too far. You need words to truly convey sorry.

I really like this. I've become rather fond of haikus... And this one was very good.

That's deep. I can't write haiku... but you brought it together nicely.