Reviews for Another Person In the Hall
Shattered Heart a Broken Dream chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
this one made me cry because it hit close to home... i befriended a girl who later told me she was thinking about committing suicide because everyone ignored her... what if i never said hi to her? wow i love your poetry lolol
obligated and on a roll chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
Touching, but it could probably be better said...work on it some more...add some imagery, some details, and the like. Good start.
Kirona of the skies chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
Aw. What a sad poem. You should hear "Hero" by SuperChic[k]. Kind of the same subject. Very awesome song. It's what I was listening to when I drew "bLUE". _
Proh Crepitus chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
So. Farking. Sad. This is really sad. Really really sad. Makes me wanna cry. Send it to your grandmother.
Katie-chan chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
That's really really sad. Really sad. I seem to be repeating myself a lot tonight. Ah well. That was really good, but really sad.