|Reviews for Whoops!|
| wouldn't YOU like to know chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
Erm-it's not really ABOUT anything...without background info, it's junk. Yeah, maybe a cool play on words, but (sorry for this next bit) not your best work. Sorry.
| Kirona of the skies chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
Hm...I agree with you, to a degree. Except for the helmet thing. Helmets save too many lives to NOT be required.
| FurballofEvilness chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
I don't know, my friend. I am the boss of my siblings, and I tell them to avoid drugs and smoking or else I'll make an attempt to maul their faces off. And I think that is a good thing. But perhaps it is because I have already decided never to touch those things myself...
I see truth in your poem. *Gives sugar cookie*
| StarRise chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
Very amusing. I think that people should be warned once, but if they screw up after that than it's their own dang fault for not listening, now isn't it?
| Proh Crepitus chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
You were right with the high comment. But it's rather funny. In a sad sorta way. yeah. That's about it.