Thats a powerful poem you've got there. Very reminiscent of the viking pride and honour. Very good. -Keith Andrew

Well...for a random piece of poetry I like this pretty good. _ Then again, I also like Norse mythology so I knew about what you were talking about when you said:

"...All that is left when all grows dim We shall perish it is told Our time shall not be forever..."

Great job!

~CR

I haven't read any of your work for AGES...

Anyway, this is a great poem. I love Norse mythology, and you've created the right atmosphere here. Well written with great flow.

-Write on!