Reviews for Enemies & Lovers
UNwitty182 chapter 8 . 10/22/2008
hey can you please update this... i think this could be you best story yet... i have read some of your other story, but this one is by far the most intriguing one and also really has the most potential... so please update...
merrymowmow chapter 8 . 11/4/2007
I was wondering when you're going to update?
Fiction vs. Reality chapter 6 . 8/28/2007
i love it. but you're getting very mixed up.

you said Ora was the eldest but here you said she was the second youngest
Punchadara chapter 9 . 7/15/2005
hey, first off, you might want to allow annonymous reviews, second i think that the story is way more straight forward and easy to understand which is a good thing. just one thing though, i know you're flip flopping with the POV, but regardless make sure you maintain one tense, because right now its fluctuating between the past and the , hope you update soon
Enigmatic Huntress chapter 9 . 7/15/2005
Nice chapter. Wasn't sure about some of the tenses but that could have just been me. The plot is really developing. I swing between disliking Cass for being so sly, haughty and manipulative and admiring her for it. What I like about Orin is that he is aware he is being played but still has to relent to her. Like when she threatened to kill herself. I like chapter two but I understand that if your not happy you have to play around with it. I'll read the changed version when it's up and tell you what I think. Where are your other reviews? I don't get it. Personally, this is one of my fav stories and it needs to get more recognition. Luv Kaitx
Enigmatic Huntress chapter 8 . 7/7/2005
Sorry I haven't reviewed in so long. The reediting you have done of the first two chapters clears it up a bit and they make more sense now. I have a better(but far from total) grasp on what is going on. So, you still have the mystery going on. Which is good. I like the fact Cathy is starting to care for him although she's wise enough to be aware that could get in the way of her plans and leave her vunerable. But it was nice seeing a more human side to her in this chapter. It is amusing how they both have quite a lot in common in certain areas and can figure each other out when nobody else can. One question, though. Are we hetting the real version of events through Andrea/Cathy's memory or Dove's misguided version? From the way It's written I'm thinking it's the correct version and Cath is thinking back but I'm just guessing. Wondering if Dove is so innocent as she appears to be. I mean her dad did say she had some of her mother in her. Apart from odd spelling or little tense issues this was perfect. Most of those issues were in the second chapter anyway and this is very complex and interesting. Did you get the name of Dove from the chosen or is it just a name you ave heard before and liked? I like it though. It seems to fit her quite well at present. Thanks for letting me now about that fanfiction story. I'll def be checking it out. Once agai- really good. I just hope you carry on writing this. Luv Kaitx
Enigmatic Huntress chapter 6 . 5/22/2005
You found me out! I was actually starting to believe nobody on this site had ever heard of LJ. Yes, I'm a big fan of Ash but Damon out of the vampire diaries wasn't so bad either. I'm STILL waiting to see if Ash and ML ever end up together. But, till then, I'll content myself reading stories like this. Catherine is really sly, isn't she? I was glad he was smart enough to figure out the ever increasing holes in her story. Yeah, my mother died a year after I was born. Oh, no, wait! She died in childbirth. Lol. I must admit to being rather shocked she made such a obvious error-I thought she was smarter but then again, at present, she is only 8. Catherine is a really complex and entertaining character but I have a feeling she's about to meet her match. This story shows a lot of thought and the characters are engaging-the fact they are quite deep and especially in Cathy's case-dark just make it that much better to read. Luv Kaitx
Punchadara chapter 4 . 5/15/2005
hey this is a really interesting story,i think it could really be published. i like the switches in time and character point of views, even though im a little lost, i have a feeling ill understand everything as the story progresses, anyway great job!
Enigmatic Huntress chapter 2 . 5/14/2005
Ok, good chapter. I've already reviewed this story up to now as a whole but I forgot to add you to my fav story list so it's making me review again. Luv Kaitx
Enigmatic Huntress chapter 5 . 5/14/2005
This is shaping up to be one of my favs. I like the blending in of different times and the various things going on. Want to see andrea/catherine meet him and how she uses him for her own ends. I wonder what poor Dove will do when she realises her mother is still alive and what she is like. Really admire Andera's determination to succeed in life and stength of will. I also want to see what happens with Tony. I'm preety pissed you only have 3 reviews for this. Update soon, luv Kaitx
Enigmatic Huntress chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
Opening was up a lot of crucial questions, who is Cas?Why did he keep her from her grandmother?I gather her mum has something to do with all this and that's why her spoilt, manipulative tendences come the rest soon, luv Kaitx
murky chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
Hey there. Decided your summary was pretty interesting and have read your first chapter. Very interesting stuff. I really do want to know what's going to happen next. It's just the part where it's half flashback. (the middle portion where she's remembering how her dad was killed - she went to her grandmother's etc.) The tenses there are slightly weird. Maybe you should stick to her recounting it, or just leave it as her thoughts at that moment. Am I making sense? Anyway, hope you'll update soon. )
murky chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
Hey there. Decided your summary was pretty interesting and have read your first chapter. Very interesting stuff. I really do want to know what's going to happen next. It's just the part where it's half flashback. (the middle portion where she's remembering how her dad was killed - she went to her grandmother's etc.) The tenses there are slightly weird. Maybe you should stick to her recounting it, or just leave it as her thoughts at that moment. Am I making sense? Anyway, hope you'll update soon. )