Reviews for Transparent
this is britt chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
everything about this poem seems so haunting and soft...then the last line gives it that extra spark of vulnerability.
Joewhatever chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
I don't know. I liked it, but it feels unfinished. Maybe that's the point? It does sound interesting. I especially like:

And you sometimes listen to what I sayWhen it’s most inconvenient

Maybe because I can relate? -_-" Anyway, nice work.

flo
WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
That last line... WOW.
ratatooie chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
It took me a few times to read this before it started to make sense to me, but it's gorgeous, almost frightening in a way. Nice work! - you are Mine said she