wow! yay teresa! i love it! but you need to keep going! the suspense is killing me!

wow my computer is actually working with me for once... YES! Well I really love the detail you put into this story and you describe weaponry so well! I love you portray all of the characters though It'll take me a while before I learn all the names but none the less this is a really good story! I really think you should update! And you're poems are really good to only I haven't gotten around to their review so I'll start on that once I'm done typing this one or I'll just read your new story... lolz... Well I'll see you at school!