Reviews for Oh Dreadful Hour
DukDog27 chapter 1 . 2/4/2005
The first line of every stanza ("oh...") gives it a dramatic quality that I don't like, but "life to the grain" is great, it gives the rain concrete meaning to go along with the abstract "protection."
Maxwell K chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
I like the last stanza the best.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
Wow. So far your poetry is mad cool. - Keep up the good work! XD

* Noelle *
Emmytastic gal chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
THAT WAS AWESOME. WOW. I absolutely love it. You are definitly not a bad writer, a VERY good one, in fact. keep up the fab work and check out my new poem. write on...-Em
incandescent.smiles chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
whoa. that was really good. I mean REALLY good. I especially like the part about the blood spraying like perfume and painting red roses in bloom (give me a break, I can't remember the whole thing). but wow. just awesome.

leila*
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
nice job
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
wow. Aaron, I'm at a lost for words! that was an awesome poem, maybe one of the best you've written! i loved it, keep up the great writing!