Reviews for IPT : Creation Myth
Cobster chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
Cool. Long time, no review. I like the IPT stuff. This acutally reminds me of my own poem, Primer. You should read it. Has kind of the same message, but it's longer. Anyhoo, very nice job with this.
WickedSilence chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
Beautifully written. I found one thing that might or might not be spelled correctly: stanza 7, line 1- "easle" should be "easel". Otherwise, good poem.
firehair-222 chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
very surprising ending, but what cani expect from a mad poet? wonderful

-firehair
The System Mother chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
Nice. I like the flow, and the all in all of the imagery is impressive.