Reviews for Bloodlust
potogold chapter 11 . 6/15/2010
I don't know if you're even still on this site, writing stories (I haven't made it yet to your profile 8D ) but I just wanted to tell you that I absolutely loved this story. The way you wrote her darker moments was beautiful, expressive. I know that's a weird word to use for such a taboo subject, but I'm not one to sit there and say something's bad because it's not flowers and butterflies. There's beauty in death, you catch my drift.

I don't know how this story doesn't have more reviews, but I for one loved it. Amazing story.
Sendako chapter 2 . 7/28/2008
Oh, I really enjoyed this chapter! I'm going to continue reading until the end, unless something happens to me. (Like anything would happen to me anyway.)
Sendako chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
I find myself a little interested in this storyline. I'm curious as how all of this started. Maybe I should continue reading to find out?
terrorofthehighway chapter 11 . 7/25/2008
Not bad! Especially the ending.

However, seriously too much angst and whining. It's like- I'm a good girl, I have this deep dark secret, OMG what should I do? The writing pulls it off, but not everything.
Nokturnal Augury chapter 11 . 6/1/2008
I would have never expected to be leaving this sort of review for THIS story, but

THAT ENDING WAS SO CUTE! XD XD XD XD XD...

mail you soon.

DM1
Rhiannon of the Moon chapter 12 . 9/17/2007
I loved your story. It was beautiful. It was amazing. I was so happy when I checked and realized you finished it, and sad at the same time because this beautifully macabre tale was over. The ending confused me a little though. Did Lou take Abby's name and pretend to be her? That is what I perceived. Also, is there/ will there be a sequel?
april chapter 7 . 6/18/2007
not chap 7?
Nokturnal Augury chapter 12 . 6/18/2007
Haha XD I finally got to finish the darn thing. I really liked where it went, though the ending caught me by surprise. I was a little lost too, not quite knowing who it was that was talking in the last chapter. Lou didn't kill Abby, right? It was that "overly eager boy", nee? And 'August'? v_v I suppose this is what happens when you spread out reading a story over so many months. I'll bug you about the details personally. Haha.

Anyways. Good job *applauds* If you want to send it off to a publisher, go right ahead dear. Make sure you MAKE revisions, though don't make them GINORMOUS, like mine were. :) Those cost me a very good story, you know.

Love always!
His Broken Little Flutterby chapter 11 . 3/20/2007
Hm. I liked it alot actually. It is kinda different yet really good. Think you meant "Lou" though at the end, instead of "Abby" Other then that was awesome.
Ski Aer chapter 11 . 3/17/2007
Is that Lou at the end?
Ski Aer chapter 10 . 3/17/2007
Woah. Strange there at the end.
Ski Aer chapter 9 . 3/17/2007
I've got to hurry and finish this up..
Ski Aer chapter 8 . 3/17/2007
Awhh..
Ski Aer chapter 7 . 3/17/2007
Hey! WHERE'S THE EVIL LAUGH!
Ski Aer chapter 6 . 3/17/2007
If you're worried about our parents not liking it just use a psydomneum like you've got now. If you go to the right publisher, they'll go crazy over it, all of that "realistic youth problems" and all sorts of that crap. They'll probably use it for some sort of campaign to get money out of the government.
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