Reviews for My Beautiful Mistake |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm in love. This story's real, but beautiful. And I hate her dad. I really do. I probably shouldn't, but I can't help it. |
![]() ![]() Wow! She can't move back to Ohio. There is no "Ryan" there, trust me I know! Love your story keep posting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, I was waiting to see how Aaron and Ryan would fight? Hmm is that the reason he's gone... woah, may be he's in Cali? Nah, but it wouldn't leave without saying goodbye to her and well, he still has his bro's wedding to go. Lol it's going to be awesome... I'm suspecting something after the whole ceremony though ;o) Loved this: She really surprised me. Rachel was a beautiful blonde with a great body. She could’ve had anyone but she saved herself. For Aaron.- Wow, that is so incredibly awesome! Seriously makes you think that she is the absolute right woman for him D Thanks for the great read. It's uncurible? *runs around screaming in circles while waving her arms overhead* Lol! Good job hun. Take care, ~Bubblegum |
![]() ![]() ![]() so she finally admits (kinda) that she loves ryan. im so happy. you made my day. i just love these kind of stories and this chapter was one of your best. but what is she going to do about moving? maybe she can stay there with someone while her dad leaves. i mean, this is her senior year and hen she will leave anyway. she can't go back becuase i know from experience that no matter how cool you think it will be to see your old friends, it would just be extremely awkward. i mean, everyone has moved on in their lives and it just isnt as great. well, update soon please! thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, a lot happened, didn't it? Her father is really insensitive; he really messed that one up. i hope they decide not to move back...or whaever. cute fact about rachel, it really does make her more endearing lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was good chapter...post more soon...is chris in love with ryan?...loving it... |
![]() ![]() ![]() shucks i love this story its too cute! lol i lovs it! wat about Jon from back home? I liked him too bless cant wait to see chapter21 buhbai! |
![]() ![]() omg...what's with Ryan? where is he? WHY IS SHE MOVING? gr... at elast Rachel Marie is getting better... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was glad to see a new chapter posted. I can't wait to see what happens with Chris and Ryan at the wedding. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *cires*... and then if just ended, like that... haha... i like your story... its really pretty! BUT SHE CAN"T MOVE BACK TO OHIO, that doesn't even makes sense, i mean they have a home out here and a job, why uproot themsleves again? im consufed... other than that... keep writing :D |
![]() ![]() where the hell did ryan go? vanishes for a week. is this story ending soon? cuz it sure does feel like it is... with her having to move and all. and the realization that she's in love with ryan. i hope it isn't but it may be. i don't get why they're moving... like wow, you're telling your teenage daughter you're getting remarried (she's gettin a stepmom) and you've got a kid on the way (a new sibling much younger) PLUS heck we're uprooting you and moving you back. you would think they would be aware of how that is such a horrible plan... well it's not THAT horrible it's just that he didn't even bother to find out christine's opinion about anything, not that she would really have a say in the stepmom/baby thing. but moving, she should at least have been able to say she didn't want to leave. update soon, good luck with end of school. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I KNOW! we're always going back earlier and earlier every single stinkin year. It's torture! Just two more years left and I've off to college! Anyways i loved this! update as soon as possible |
![]() ![]() I know I have already told you how much I love your story, but it can't hurt to do it again. I love your story! |
![]() ![]() i love u'r story so much and look forward to the next chapter! Ryan is my idol! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This last chapter was really great. I hope you can come out with the next one soon. |