Reviews for My Beautiful Mistake
CassandraRose526 chapter 6 . 2/14/2005
This is a very good chapter. I loved it. Rachel is too perfect. Perfect people make me mad. he he sorry. Update soon!


Ti chapter 6 . 2/14/2005
Aw... poor Chris... I wish that too.. But it's V-day and I wish that every year... Ek, okay NOT going to get into that... Rachel sounds kewl... UPDATE SOON! (oh and this is Dez Tiny btw... lolz)-THE RANDOM CRITIC-
youspinme99 chapter 6 . 2/14/2005
aw...thats so sweet and sad...i wish i had someone like Aaron too. boohoo*tears*. well please continue, as this is on my favorite stories and I want to find out what, i think that Chris should get a boifriend and make Aaron jealous. i LoVe JeAlOuSy!well update soon...
theworldisflat chapter 5 . 2/13/2005
This story is quite wonderful. I absolutely love it... your dialogue is realistic and the characters are extremely well-developed... update soon, i'll definitely keep reading.

Dez Tiny chapter 5 . 2/12/2005
You might want to change a setting and accept anonymous reviews... you might get more that way... i'm loving the story so far. UPDATE SOON!-Ti
CassandraStacy chapter 5 . 2/12/2005
That was a good chapter. It's good to know that Aaron is faithful to his girlfriend, and hopefully realizes that Christine's too young . . . though, I still hope they get together. Oh and I don't know if this will help you any, but a lot of people usually check out their reviewers stories. So you know, if you go review people's stories who also don't have too many reviews than most likely they'll return the favor. It also helps to accept anymounomus reviews. It is automatically on, but if you go into your sign-in screen there's a place that you can turn it off. A lot of people who review here may not have a login name, or like me, or too lazy to sign in. I don't know if this will help you get more reviews or not, just thought I'd give you some advice. Update soon please!Luv,

CassandraStacy chapter 4 . 2/6/2005
I think that this is a really good story so far. I really like it. Love to see what happens next. Keep up the good work!

Angelic-goddess101 chapter 4 . 2/6/2005
Yes, reviews are good! Anyway, I love the story and I'm looking forward to your next chapter. Keep writing!
Mebbie chapter 3 . 1/22/2005
Wow this is a neat lil' story you've got going here! Christine reminds me of myself sometimes! I'd love to read more, so update when you can ok? lol you cant keep me hanging. The only improvements i can suggest is to do something with your paragraphing cos almost every sentance is on a new line when really it dosent need to be, other than that GREAT! btw i hate critising anything so dont think i'm being mean :)
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